Friday, August 30, 2013

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I look at YOU wth spark.
Fr YOU r d’ brightest star,
While am only the moon.
Juz waiting fr ur light,
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Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2013

A nice poem has been corrupted by unconventional abbreviations and abridgement of words.

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Efirol T. 02 September 2017

Thank you for ur comment. Its been years since I last visited this account. I didnt know its still here as am busy with myself doing stuff for my so called 'career'. Anyhow, am glad i can still open my account. And bec of this, am soon planning to post more poems i created with my absence. hahaha Thank you! ! ! ^ ___^

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Efirol T. 02 September 2017

Thank you for your comment. Its been years since i last visited here. I guess am just too busy with my life. Anyhow, am planning to upload more poems I wrote during my absence. I am glad I can still open my account. ^___^

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