You Poem by Paramananda Mahanta

You

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when ice cladded winter
Chilled my bones,
You call me to challenge
To breathe your calmness,
And to measure my veins.


Time is still notshaken
Rubbed me frequently again and again,
Like thorns of golden rose
Stab my heart,
So stubborn to haunt.

A sullen reply I pass
O truest of you,
I a built of nothingness
A carve of silence,
Is not less true.

Monday, April 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2019

Like thorns of golden rose Stab my heart, So stubborn to haunt... a carve of silence. very original in presentation. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2019

Time is still notshaken Rubbed me frequently again and again, Like thorns of golden rose Stab my heart, So stubborn to haunt. very poetic descriptions, .. a sense of mystery in ur poems always. love to read u. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Paramananda. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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