You Poem by Jacqui Thewless

You

Rating: 5.0


your face disperses
your visibility is
almost completely

gone but for the wound
where your subtle dialect
left a lasting mark

who can tell how long
this interior music
of your voice will stay?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(for the poet, Lloyd Merritt, written in 2009)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 25 August 2009

a great poem of symbolism, poetical words with a great power of suggestion................10+++

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