You Ain'T Gettin Jack! Poem by elysabeth faslund

You Ain'T Gettin Jack!

Rating: 5.0


You wanted my heart, soul
On Layaway...
That ain't gonna get
Jack.
You can't afford the full
Price of Love?
You ain't gonna get little
By little...Jack!
And, uh, just a thought...
How many other Layaways
Are you checking on...?
Mr. Jack be Nimble,
Mr. Jack be Quick,
Fixin to get your ass
Singed
By Love's flaming
Candlestick...
Don't knock, knock, knock...
Cause I'm gone, gone, gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 November 2007

Your personal and poetic strength continues to astonish. Your words compel the reader to sit up and take notice. I hope he gets to read this. Great poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Robert Howard 06 November 2007

Something tells me that Jack's party is over.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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