You're standing here, before i came.
I turn back, but you hold me close.
You know my pain, I had in me.
You know already the words i'ld like to say.
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this prayer is actually very common, but i always like to read a prayer with full of meaning in life. how we believe to gods love and that how he keep us on his loving care.
I like how you combine the worlds. This prayer really full of meaning. Nice work. its 9 for me.
this is prayer of love in embracing that justifies the craving within, well penned, i like