Thursday, July 30, 2015

You Are His Happiness Comments

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I thought he was happy,
Happy with me because I loved him,
Later when I saw him
sitting alone and seeing you.
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Ajita Pandey
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Pankaj Aggarwal 30 July 2015

The deep pain in your heart is clearly evident in this poem. You think you are happy, but you are not. You say you want nothing except that your lover is happy with his girlfriend. Are you sure he will be happy with her? It raises another question, whether your love cares about your happiness? A nice poem - hopefully it soothes your pain. Keep writing.

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