Sunday, January 22, 2012

You Are Mine... Comments

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The pain of this time...
giving me a sense of coming good time..
I know you will be mine,
beacuase you all all mine.
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Soumendra Hota
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Dave Walker 22 January 2012

A great poem really like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Mental Hospital.

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Rajendran Muthiah 22 January 2012

Beautiful third stanza; playful second stanza; hopeful first stanza. The whole poem gleams with love!

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