Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,339 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

You Are My Beauty Flower Of My Life - Poem by Ali Sabry

You are my beauty flower of my life
You are my rose flower that I have it in whole my life
They burned fire inside this beautiful flower to make you forget me simply
The night is coming & going very fast
& simply I can't seen you beside me in these beautiful nights
I feel in comfort just when I see you beside me
& you know this honey
My eyes tears have taste inside my mouth
Because I'm crying too much in all the night so I can't drain them easily
My tears look like the failing water
If something happen for you I will destroy those persons who want to hurt you
I will vanish anybody who wants to touch one piece from your black hair
You are my life flower but they pull you out from your roots
With all my sadness
They want me to forget you simply
If you died or you stay alive & they hurt you
I have judgment day with those persons who did this to you
They day is going fast & I didn't hear your pure voice
You are my lovely beauty princess
You are my fate and I will wait for you in whole my life
I will wait you to the last day of my life to my death day
I will never forget you in whole my life
I promise you that the day will come soon & we will meet each other simply
Take care for yourself honey
Take care & be careful
My god bless you

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

You are my beauty flower of my life

Comments about You Are My Beauty Flower Of My Life by Ali Sabry

  • Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek (8/6/2016 8:46:00 AM)


    Dear Ali
    I have come through many pieces of your poems, but I would like to ask you to make serious reading in poetry art. You also need to master the grammatical rules as your grammar is so poor; a thing that can spoil your work.
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  • (6/12/2016 8:23:00 AM)


    The poem has thick undercurrent of tragedy striking, villains at work.. sad aspect of love life.. (Report) Reply

  • Sahra Hussein (5/7/2016 12:59:00 PM)


    what a nice poem and lovely words
    the ways really shows pure love.
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  • V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy (2/21/2016 9:59:00 PM)


    your poems much of longings and desires filled or unfulfilled, wish you all that you deserve (Report) Reply

  • David Turow (5/10/2015 9:00:00 PM)


    A very touching poem. You can tell it comes straight from the heart. (Report) Reply

  • Sahra Hussein (5/1/2015 3:15:00 AM)


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    You are my beauty flower of my life
    You are my rose flower that I have it in whole my life
    They burned fire inside this beautiful flower to make you forget me simply
    The night is coming & going very fast
    & simply I can't seen you beside me in these beautiful nights
    I feel in comfort just when I see you beside me

    it is simply fantastic! !
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  • (10/17/2012 11:02:00 AM)


    i bet she was verry flattered with this it is a very good write and im glad i read it good job. (Report) Reply

  • (10/3/2012 1:46:00 AM)


    I bet the girl must be flattered. Straight to the point. Nice poem, pal. (Report) Reply

  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (10/2/2012 2:20:00 PM)


    Ali, it is full of love and passion of a young man like you, written with much commitment and sincerity in the heart. what has happened to your character here that she must leave or be destroyed by others. Are you reflecting a part of the tumult in your country right now? Anyway, very good way of writing this poem. Only it is good to spell out the conjunction and as is and not the abbreviated form &. (Report) Reply

  • Stephanie Wright (10/2/2012 1:40:00 PM)


    its good you just need to work on your grammer but its good (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2012 12:23:00 PM)


    Dear Ali! You write excellent verses. It is a pity, me while to acquire English very not easy, after all for me Russian is native. I am very glad that in Iraq there are such remarkable poets. It means that the future belongs to the world, instead of war. (Report) Reply

  • Muhammad Sowkat Ali Zahan Rumman (9/28/2012 1:04:00 PM)


    nice poetry, keep it, best regard (Report) Reply

  • Udaya R. Tennakoon (9/27/2012 4:51:00 PM)


    a good poem.. wih u the best (Report) Reply

  • Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan (9/20/2012 12:19:00 AM)


    That was a good portraiture you have there Mr. Ali; but I'd really like you visit your grammatical structures and setting. Those are very paramount in poems else you might be leaving another message other than your intended message. All the same a good write, keep it up (Report) Reply

  • (9/13/2012 5:22:00 AM)


    I really liked how you compared the love of your life with a beauty flower. Symbolizing a woman as a flower has so many possibilities to conjure images of her as your lover, and as an object of manipulation. I applaud your romanticism. (Report) Reply

  • (9/10/2012 6:23:00 PM)


    nice my dear I hope for you the best
    you very Talented!
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  • Suelyn Walters (8/24/2012 2:39:00 PM)


    Great Work Here! I like this as well. (Report) Reply

  • Buyi Newton Philip (8/22/2012 2:15:00 AM)


    good work Mr. Ali Sabry, as tomorrow smiles on you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, February 19, 2016


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