You Are My Hope Poem by Ben Kaiser

I enjoy the N'Sync reference there...baby Bye Bye Bye Bye...haha not bad though...rhyming doesnt sound fake like you see in some poems it doesnt really flow off the tongue though, and don't be afraid to use punctuation in your poems. Just because its a poem doesnt mean you dont use periods and commas like you would normally. You have a passion for writing poems, stick with it, take in any advice you receive, and keep it up bro...