You Are Whole World To Me. Poem by Gaurav Pandey

You Are Whole World To Me.



Whenever i don't see u near,
my world seems to be disappear,
i dunno why this thing happen to me,
without u i will never be free,
you are the whole world to me,
you are the whole world to me...
I hope you can understand,
your heart is my only stand,
but how can i express to you,,
what i feel,,,
and how can i show my love to you,
I am the river and you are my sea,
you dunno how much you are precious to me,
you are whole world to me,,
you are whole world to me,,


'songsfromsea'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i was trying to write a song,, but i did not get success,, it is just a work on rhymes,,, but still i m posting here,,, hope you guys will love it..._Sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 16 August 2013

This is a nice work songfromsea, just dont write words like dont know as dunno...you as u, always prefer full one...your work is very nice and i love how you use river and sea comparison...nice idea! _SOul

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