You Confuse Me Poem by Devin McKeever

You Confuse Me



What do you want from me?
The vexation I feel around you,
Is beyond comprehension,
Yet I feel so much apprehension.

Get out of my mind,
you've already left your mark,
What else do you want?

Is this a game?
Do I keep you entertained?

How horrible you make me feel,
I've made so many mistakes,
But so have you.

Haven't we already been through this ordeal?
I'm not sure,
If this is even real.

I've drank your poison,
I'm not your toy and,
I'm not your pet,
Haven't I payed,
My emotional debt?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
River Someday 16 February 2008

Wow that is exactly what i'm going through right now. I understand this poem better then my own. Nice work, You have a talent. :)

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I've been through it as well... many times before. But I liked it. Good work. ~Trysta

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Sen Unknown 08 December 2007

i kind of like it. i been through it so... i kind of know how you feel.

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Devin Mckeever 08 December 2007

NOW that I read it, it seems a bit sloppy Oh well I'd REALLY appreciate your comments! !

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