Friday, April 26, 2013

You Created A Dying Heart Comments

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I am sat here now, shaking, crying
My only wish now is that I could be dying
If only that could happen, that would be great
I have decided, that is my fate.
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Calum Thomas
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David Wood 01 May 2013

This is a really sad poem. I hope it is fictional, if not I hope you get over your loss.

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..... W@king Up..... 26 April 2013

I think this is one of the saddest poems I've ever read... I feel like you were reading it out to me and I couldn't stop imagining it :) it was just beautiful. Keep writing, I have a feeling you'll do really well :) -W

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