You Decide For Me Poem by Sumita Jetley

You Decide For Me

Rating: 5.0


now.

i can't see anything
worth seeing.

i want borrow your eyes,
for a while.

till
i regained consciousness.

ef et al

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
and, there is stillness in words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 26 August 2017

This is unique. I read and moved to another poet but this piece kept returning to my mind so I came back for another read. I really like what you did here with such simple lines and straight-forward words that yet create an air of mystery and layers of meaning. Since it refuses to leave my mind, I'm giving it a 10++++++++++++

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