Cash Onadele

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You Do; What You Do - Poem by Cash Onadele

(a gift to a friend, passing through)
I.
When I have given all of me, my body quakes,
What else can I do; if I make mistakes?
Like the sun, up above, would you love me the same?
The rest is up to you,
You do; what you do
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Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

YOU DO; WHAT YOU DO
Lyric Poem: “ a prodigious heart quakes for affection, in the ocean of life”
SHOOTS OF OLIVES POEM BOOK COLLECTION
CHAPTER THIRTY SEVEN

Comments about You Do; What You Do by Cash Onadele

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/27/2015 11:49:00 AM)


    beautiful expressions of love, you have portrayed your passions very well in the poem. thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015



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