You Don'T Care Poem by emma nelson

You Don'T Care

Rating: 4.3


when you look at me
i stop breathing
but you don't care
when you call my name
i know iwill spend
the rest of my day dreaming
but you don't care
all i want to do is to cry
every time you walk away
but i do nothing
because iknow that i can't ask you to stay
and
to call you back is the hardest thing to say
you know that one word from you
is enough to fix my day
but you will never say it
because
you don't care! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brenda Arroyo 16 March 2010

It hurts... to feel this way. But I liked how you put it all together.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 04 March 2010

A sheer jilt spurned…. A poetic indulgence poets’ love and you too did it nicely … 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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