Wednesday, March 30, 2005

You Don’t Know Me Comments

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You may hear things about me, but you don’t know me.
You may find out my favorite hobby, but you don’t me.
You may know my style of clothing, but you don’t know me.
You may know my personality, but you don’t know me.
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Felix Lugo
May
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Ivy Christou 30 March 2005

Great poem Felix. I couldn't agree more with the last verse.. well done and keep posting HBH

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 30 March 2005

Hi Hugo, I like the rhythm in this poem very much! Revisit the line...'You may find out my favorite hobby, but you don't (know) me.

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Felix Lugo

Felix Lugo

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