You Have... Poem by Tiffanie Austin

You Have...

Rating: 5.0


You have eyes that sparkle like stars
when you look at me, my heart feels locked behind bars.

You have a voice that is strong and sweet
to receive a kiss from your lips would be a real treat.
When I think of when we first did meet
you gave me a sweet smile as a first greet.

Ever since I saw your unique adorable smile
I stop and think for a while.
Then when all of my emotions pile
I write a poem and put it in my poem file.

You have the cutest face
that would be most angelic to trace.
Your personality is the perfect mystery case.
Oh, how I enjoy gazing at the kind hearted, friendly,
expression on your face.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aaron Kaarnes 23 December 2009

this poem is nice i love the expression, the information percieved, and its colorful impression. That kesav dude or wutever needs to go... O.O

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Kesav Easwaran 16 December 2009

you go expressive eloquent there on how you 'feel' your 'love'...sweetly reflective Tiffanie...the words get personified there...provide vivid image good composition rhyming rhythmic...10

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