Edder Ramirez

You Left Me - Poem by Edder Ramirez

Where did you go?
I couldn't even say goodbye
I've never felt this way before
Although you're gone
Candles still burn without a
flame on
How could you leave me this way?
I'm no longer touching heaven
Where is my angel?
My angel left me
She wont hold me now
but I'll give you melodies
to help you on your way

Comments about You Left Me by Edder Ramirez

  • (5/2/2011 9:32:00 PM)

    Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery.
    Great stuff.
    A perfect...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 2, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 4, 2011

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