You Made Me Feel Red (For H.) Poem by Alaa ...

You Made Me Feel Red (For H.)

Rating: 3.5


Like a strawberry you are always red
Like a pink flower when you blush
I felt your heart as my bed
And your hands my paint brush
For when you look at me I see the world in its green dress
Crazy and hazy with a smile on the face
A sweet confusion in my heart makes me feel peace
My soul flying light and free
And For the first time I can see.
You are the one who made me feel red.
Like strawberry, like you and me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noha Ewies 04 January 2009

If I had read this poem before knowing that it's YOU who wrote it, I would have figured out that IT WAS YOU! ! ! Alaa.. the girl in red! ;) Coco moot! I loved it! !

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Me Myself 31 December 2008

it's wonderful...... 'your heart is my bed'....... it's so...... red..... :)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 December 2008

Hey your poem is as sweet as strawberry. I like them till I feel I can touch them.Keep writing Alaa!

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