Friday, November 21, 2025

You Make Me Smile Comments

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I see a pretty butterfly
Right there amongst the flowers,
Dancing gently neath the sun,
I could sit right here for hours.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Theo Scott 23 November 2025

Thats how life seems as well, we are passerbys here today amd gone tomorrow, but we have to enjoy every moment, making each moment count just as the butterfly enjoyed and basked itself in the beautiful flowers.God bless you

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Timber Koleden 22 November 2025

Wonderful well wishes and kind regards for the wonderful butterflies that visit you! So beautifully penned! Thank you for sharing another poem!

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Isadora Quagmire 21 November 2025

What a lovely poem filled with excellent and vivid detail! ! ! This poem mirrors my reaction every time I see a butterfly! Thank you for sharing this stunning poem!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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