You Make Me Who I Am Comments

‘…Every time it rains, /Your words unshackle my soul to freedom…’ Very much Romantic…rhapsodic…and glittering metaphor shrouding whole Soul 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

This is a very well crafted poem, 10

Between this sunrise and the next sunset, red is the same reality, and my fagged eyelids cannot change it. 10

Light comes bearing your name. It reach my eyelids, It reach my thoughts, It reach my ships. sweet stanza, romantic way of written but still philosophical touch is found there...which means your passion of writing is cognitive way of look... impressive expression and menaingful thought... I relly loved this poem and read three time and enjoyed a lot..well done mari dear for this sweet and well written poem...10/10

one of best poems..that i read...Chiefly... You make me understand who I am, You release me to myself...... very good...Mari.. with curtsy Ramin .

beautiful poem I love it 10

Between the kingfisher's large scream and the sea, the feelings become failed ships. Light comes bearing your name. It reach my eyelids, It reach my thoughts, It reach my ships. Between this sunrise and the next sunset, red is the same reality, and my fagged eyelids cannot change it. rarely one chance upon work of such supereme brilliance.... I really do wish it was mine :)

I loveeeeeeeeee it! ! !