Saturday, April 21, 2018

You Never Knew Comments

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Your soft eyes melted away my heart,
You thought I was creepy because of my art,
The way you smiled when you talked about her,
Everything but you was a blur,
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Hannah
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 April 2018

Write comment. A good start, Hannah. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 21 April 2018

A nice creation on infatuation embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Hannah and do remain enriched.

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Arthur 21 April 2018

Woow, Hannah such a great poem. I loved the beginning of it. I think you could work on it. It will be an awesome construction

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Rini Shibu 21 April 2018

A beautiful piece about your crush..

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