Friday, October 14, 2011

You Ruined Us Comments

Rating: 4.0

The demon inside you wants to play
Will you let it escape?
Can you feel him clawing in your skin?
He scratches and bites and yells
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Lyssa Renea
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William Holdaway 08 November 2011

Good poem. Emotions tend to be over powering though.7.5/10

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Steven Dart 14 October 2011

Scary, I wish I couldn't relate but unfortunately I can.

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