Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 34 Points (26/05/1989)

You Smiled Looking At Me - Poem by Jinal Oswal

You smiled looking at me,
And so I did back,
I initiated the talk
And you replied.

Slowly, slowly it changed into chatting for hours,
Gradually we both grow our relation,
You somewhat knew me,
And so did I know you.

You showed me all the colors,
And made my life colorful,
You appreciated me,
And I praised you.

I do like every small thing you do,
And love your efforts to make them lovely,
I wondered if things will stay the same,
And you will be the name on my lips.

Time changed, I changed,
You change,
And drastically my world changed,
Just one wish from my heart, you always be fine my sweetheart.



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  • (9/2/2011 7:00:00 AM)


    yes jinal, u r improving...whoa! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 9, 2011


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