You’ve Got Me Believing Poem by Kaspa Richards

You’ve Got Me Believing



You’ve got me believing maybe it aint all bad
This life I've had since I was a little lad
I got air in my lungs and a song to be sung
As I forget everything to do with when I was young

You’ve got me believing oh yes I can
Stand on my own two feet and be a man
My sun didn’t shine on me I was so cold
But now I burn bright I thought you said I’d fold?

You’ve got me believing I will kill anyone who makes you fall
No one in my life comes close to you baby no one at all
I never let anyone in but you just walk through my walls
Ill trust love and care for you until that starry sky falls

You’ve got me believing I need to write a second verse
About my baby who you should know claimed me first
When I’m with you I’m lost in time immersed in every minute
It’s only when I’m with you I see the sky is the limit

You’ve got me believing thank god you’re away
Living down on the coast that's where you play
You’re apart from this family so you’ll grow up fine
And ill be the uncle who you will say “he writes rhymes”

You’ve got me believing I need to find solid work
But I'm the type of guy who whistles why he twurks
Music up loud and getting on with what I gotta do
I'm happy right now so I won’t take orders off of you

You’ve got me feeling like I'm the Wealthiest man
As I stand here with my riches resting in my hand
Money and weed no stems or seeds
Just my baby here now is all I need

You’ve got me believing that with you there’s a flip side
To the good the bad and the ugly of which I use to reside
I got my baby in my world and my mate who is tight till the end
I never thought id say this but life maybe you can be a friend

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cleveland Gibson 07 July 2011

A slip into 'got' too many times for the reader. Try other ways of saying it.

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Kaspa Richards

Kaspa Richards

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