Saturday, June 18, 2011

You Walked Away! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day you walked away
I watched you leave
Begging you to stay
Instead, you left me to grieve
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Craig Piercy
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 June 2011

Good poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Very well conceived. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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Craig Piercy

Craig Piercy

Hamilton New Zealand
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