Thursday, February 16, 2006

You Went Away Comments

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Death came to you without warning
you closed your eyes your weekened heart ceased to beat
You couldn't stay you went away without saying goodbye
I didn't cry not then i just wondered why
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jenni burt
miss warning Goodbye
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Gina Onyemaechi 16 February 2006

Yep, there's a ton of feeling in this poem, Jenni. I think you could strengthen the feeling by using more figurative expressions. Best wishes, Gina.

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jenni burt

jenni burt

melbourne
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melbourne
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