You Were Loved Poem by Estrellita Dedel

You Were Loved

Rating: 5.0


you destroyed the universe and got away with it
simply because you were loved
you were permitted to drown the world
because you were loved
you breathed all the air for yourself;
you left everyone breathless anyway
turned the waters into rock beds,
and made the sun belch a purple ray
the show however became too tiring
and the love made the stomachs bloat
in the sea where you were playing
your hidden ugliness did float
so don't complain if now you are loathed
if now your hands and feet are tied
the admiration must have had evaporated
the ebbing passion must have had dried
hush now, you beautiful creature
dry those tears and scream no more
just remember, beautiful creature
you were loved like no one else before

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Estrellita Dedel 14 August 2011

Oh, thanks, Romeo! Your comment's the first one I got in PoemHunter and I'm so glad it is an appreciation of one of my works. :)

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Romeo Della Valle 12 August 2011

Wow! Estrellita! What a beautiful, heart touching and well penned write which shows clearly you poetic and creative talent! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your poignant writes! God Bless you! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City....

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Estrellita Dedel

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Davao City, Philippines
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