Yan Lee


You, You And You - Poem by Yan Lee

out of the blue
every individual have something else to do
even though they are busy finding something new
yet there is a big question of you

you did not know what to do
keeps on walking without knowing so
watching the haggard people on there view
searching his entire soul to renew

touching every corner of your face
as you do not grasp each and passing days
you just only wish a straight ace
that's exactly you needed to win the race


Comments about You, You And You by Yan Lee

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/5/2009 3:37:00 AM)

    lovely poem u needed to win the race... good imagination (Report)Reply

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  • (6/3/2009 3:13:00 AM)

    touching every corner of your face
    as you do not grasp each and passing days
    you just only wish a straight ace
    that's exactly you needed to win the race.


    ..beautiful lines are created in this poem..grace
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/2/2009 1:55:00 AM)

    'touching every corner of your face
    as you do not grasp each and passing days
    you just only wish a straight ace
    that's exactly you needed to win the race'

    A marvelous poem with nice ending,10+++
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 2, 2009



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