Your A Faggot Poem by Ben Luwhiski

Wow that was really good not fake at all.

I wasn't sure what to make of this poem when I saw the title, but it was really good. You have some great talent. I think many people write their best when they acctually have that raw emotion and can put what they feel onto paper. If some one writes about some thing sad but they're not really crying as they write about it dosen't seem to have that same feel to it as some one who is just frustrated at the world and they just poar their heart out in to the words that they're writing, when you do that there is always more to the words than just words, there is more of a picture with feeling and life when you do that. And it turns out better than what you expect it to

Hi Bernard, harsh times my friend, not a nice feeling to be treated in that form when there's so much love in the world being wasted on the wrong souls...but we learn by it..and its that what makes us stronger as people in the end... Stay strong.. best wishes Jon

Geeessshhh...what a 'Dreadful' poem. lol. Loved the metaphors. Nice.