Your Albatross Poem by Lin Kah Mun

Your Albatross

Rating: 5.0


You stand elegantly at the top
You held your confidential and pride
You glance others coldly
Yet you are warm inside
You held agony in the emerald eyes of yours
The shoulder of yours were silently swollen
The albatross in your life
Must be
A great weakness
And great strength of yours
You never told others
The suffer you have gone through
You always keep it to yourself
until one day
The burden was not just be a burden
But something more
Finally the shoulder of yours
Couldn't support it
At last you tell someone
About the suffering you have been through
Since that very beginning of your life
To the person you value the most
In your life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Nothing 05 July 2009

Amazing poem, I take it the albatross is a representative that a thrive for freedom causes distress when contained? amazing poem 10/10 ^^

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