Your Eyes Poem by Melissa Nikolova

Your Eyes



Why does my world revolve around you?
Smaller, tighter,
I can’t seem to get away.
You’re just another black hole,
Threatening to swallow me deeper into your depths.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paige Nielsen 30 April 2009

And their eyes meet across the room...another great pinpointing of a common emotion, darling. The 'black hole' metaphor is apt, and your first line is a fantastic 'grabber'. Well done.

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