Your Fate Poem by Mandy MMR

Your Fate



Blind with rage you begin to fight
Nothing but the enemy in sight
Anger burning in your heart
Swords drawn, you jump with a start
Not knowing all the wounds you bear
For your life, you do not care
You wish to avenge your friends so dear
You face your death without fear
Their bodies strewn across the floor
Your blood is pumping though your heart is sore
Your blows are weak and falling short
You will not quit, you're not that sort
Sweat is dripping in your face
Life or death is the case
Your weapon drops and hits the wall
The final blow ends it all
Brave you were at the battle's meet
Though fallen at the enemy's feet
As you stand and stare at heaven's gate
You realize now that this is your fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
billy bob 04 November 2006

hey.. lol.. 'cheesez'.. i like your poem.. it flows and it shows so much emotion, .. yet its in simplest form.. nice lol.. im lol-ing a lot today (lols) .. much love- MUMV i wish the part where u said u wish 2 avenge friends so dear.. and u face death without fear waz emphasized just a bit more.... but all in all i liked it.. much love keep writing: -)

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