Saturday, January 12, 2013

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Your blur eyes are the same as sea
And my tired body is like a fish
Let this tired fish to stay in the sea
To be safe from the danger of fisherman
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ali naghavi
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Unwritten Soul 06 September 2013

I like the metaphor of sea and fish in this word, i having a great feeling while imagined that...it is not as i imagined when i looked at the title but this is giving me fresh look on your poem_SOul

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