Your Memory Poem by Sagi Writes

Your Memory

The butterfly
goes back and forth
between my lungs,
where there's a blast of winter
and no trace of the bright glow of autumn.

Eventually,
it sits and settles
amidst the raining petals inside my head, flabbergasted by the flash
of the first warm rays of the sun of spring.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's hard to let go, especially when that someone is already a part of your memory.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence George Craddock 06 September 2024

p2'Eventually, it sits and settles amidst the raining petals inside my head'; and the startling break through moment explanation 'flabbergasted by the flash of the first warm rays of the sun of spring.' Superb Poetry.

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Terence George Craddock 06 September 2024

p1The title 'Your Memory', reduced to delicate breath as a butterfly flutters 'back and forth between my lungs' in a cold snap season 'where there's a blast of winter and no trace of the bright glow of autumn' is exquisite imagery; extended into the wonderfully written

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