I like the theme of this song annie. Sorry to harp on about spelling (e.g.; 'you're' and not 'your') but it will help enhance the presentation of the lyrics. What's also important is that even though we can't hear the music, your lyrics encourage me to imagine how the song might sound.
Mark
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I like the theme of this song annie. Sorry to harp on about spelling (e.g.; 'you're' and not 'your') but it will help enhance the presentation of the lyrics. What's also important is that even though we can't hear the music, your lyrics encourage me to imagine how the song might sound. Mark