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The sense of longing and loss really come across in this and all the little details tell volumes without stating it outright. The conversation about love and the ability to love is really wierd. Seems like you were on a hiding to nothing there. And you really peel that apple imagery until you have a continuous strip of interconnecting images. A lonely and lost poem that can only go to the elphant's graveyard of poems.. and die. Tears enclose the images in your poems and rattel the teacups of my heart! Gina XXX