The first stanza uses commas when periods would serve them much better. They contain complete thoughts. The second stanza is faulty in logic, especially in the last two lines. Things can`t be fine and predestined and not certain and not secure.
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The first stanza uses commas when periods would serve them much better. They contain complete thoughts. The second stanza is faulty in logic, especially in the last two lines. Things can`t be fine and predestined and not certain and not secure.