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Your Unconditional Love Comments

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Your Unconditional Love

You tried your best to save me,
With your love you become anxious,
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Prabir Gayen
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Luis A. Estable 05 June 2021

The first stanza uses commas when periods would serve them much better. They contain complete thoughts. The second stanza is faulty in logic, especially in the last two lines. Things can`t be fine and predestined and not certain and not secure.

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