Yours, Addicted Poem by Maria Hartman

Yours, Addicted

Rating: 3.5


When you are here, it's never too soon
There is no time to while away
Or to pre-meditate, it's all here and now
No needless confusion, only quiet passion

Not the slightest gap between our touches
Never half-hearted, always deliberate
Don't need solitude to reap the emotion
Don't want rational, but to burn and to live

No real direction, just lovely unresolution
No lasting decisions, just heartful explorations
No wild expectations, just you, all of you
No true regrets, only pure love

I'm yours, addicted
Let me be yours, just for today

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Martin Lochner 06 February 2011

Love the sentiment here and well structured but i feel that you could have done more with it, that is why i scored you 7....

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