Thursday, August 6, 2020

Zero Consciousness Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun as it appears in dreams
Is only Nature's pale shadow.
Many, seduced by myriad screens,
Are currently ignorant
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Shaun Cronick 06 August 2020

Dominic I find when reading a modern poem it usually crashes and burns and is no great loss to disappear in its own ashes among its many kin. This is one of the few, that I wouldn't say screams in a readers face but gently whispers in his ear, compelling thoughts. 10+ and thank you good sir for a more than fine good read.

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