Zero Vsibility Poem by Liyo Denorte

Zero Vsibility

Rating: 5.0


We both know it’s raining
farther ahead
certainties are already washed and
seeped into the ditches of our failed attempts
how could we still keep on walking
even though these steps are leading us
to the brink of a cliff
how could we both keep on moving
when we know
we will fall into our own abyss
tell me.
You once told me
you’ll hold me for the rest of your life
but while you’re breathing
I felt I’m getting further and
further into the mist

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 June 2011

I liked it. Great poem written very well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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