Zzzzzzeta: From Beyond The Infinite... My First Kiss Poem by Richard Ford Bunuel Whale Carnegie Edison Simon Hitchcock Welles Christ Antunes Rodriguez Kubrick

Zzzzzzeta: From Beyond The Infinite... My First Kiss



First Kiss On Mars



A Boy and his Girl lay in the midst of a small field of wild grass surrounded by a halo grove of trees.

Her left ear is to his right as they lay and listen to the sound of the radio.

The moon is full and golden-bright.

Subtitle: TEEN-AGED LOVE



The boy turns his head slow to whisper close.

They speak but all that's heard is the song as they mouth their words as what's spoken is subtitled beneath.

Boy: See the moon...?

Girl:Its all I see.

Her eyes are child in innocence.

Boy: See more...Close your eyes...and imagine...

The girl closes her eyes.

The boy shuts his eyes



Boy:Now...open your eyes.

Extreme close-up on her eyes as she opens them bright.Obie light to sparkle and sheen her eyes bright like starlight.

At the start of opening her eyes...the camera pulls back fast on the first utterance in the song of Solar System Free from an extreme close up of her eyes in transition from the earth to the moon, when the camera comes to a halt...they find themselves there...on the moon.



They bounce about in zero gravity, holding hands, and spraying moon dust on each other like one would do in play at the beach.

Subtitle: DUST POOL.



A distant star catches the Girl's eye. The Girl points.The Boy turns to her...

Boy:Make a wish.



The girl closes her eyes quickly...repeats

Girl:I wish...I wish....

She opens them wide as her eyes quickly jut off to the side in the direction of the star.

Immediately Cut to: the star as it becomes larger and larger...shooting out fast and bright like a shooting star schooner.

Subtitle:Shooting Star Schooner.



Girl:See...(Points excitedly) The sails are full of solar wind.



The schooner anchors on the moon.A rope ladder is deployed.The Boy and Girl, still hand and hand, head for the docked schooner.They reach the deck to find the members of Stone Temple Pilots.Scott is behind the wheel of the schooner, guiding its path and mouthing the words Can we really find at the exact point of his introduction on camera.



As the song reaches the guitar solo, have the camera crane from Robert along side the schooner to reveal the name of the boat as First Kiss as it recedes off into the distance when headed fast in the direction of Mars.The planet Mars fast approaches on the starboard side.Overhead shot of the schooner traveling over the shadowed Cydonia Face of Mars.

Subtitle: Face of Mars



The Boy and Girl are at the head of the boat, they kiss.Girl turns toward boy...

Girl:My wish came true.

She smiles.He smiles back.They kiss again as the song comes to an end with the repetition of first final Reel Over.

Have the camera crane backwards from the Boy and Girl kissing and end with the name of the boat First Kiss.

Fade to Black upon the final Reel over, over, and over again.



End on high angled shot looking down upon the field of wild grass. In its center are our two love birds kissing.



Title Card: The End.

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