(I really like to hear what people have to say about my poems so send me a comment, and give me some tips or tell me what you think) i want feedback people
i grew up with my mom in a small town in New Mexico,
I lived with her till i was 12, then i got sent away, to live in a foster home, i lived there for about 2 yrs,
then my dad took custody of me when i was 14,
i lived with him for about 2 yrs then i moved up to Oregon to live with my older brother, so here i am,
living my life, working, keeping busy, i have been writing poems for about 1 month, so I'm new at this, please don't make fun! I'm graduated, I Work as a data entry specialist, for a company i will not name
i don't know what to say
other than you take my breath away
but i must admit that i am scared
for a heart brake i am not prepared
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I try so hard to keep smiling,
But I'm fed up, tired of trying,
The pain overwhelms, inside I'm dying,
For I'm growing up too fast,
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I've gone through so much pain,
not physical, but emotional,
My mom didn't care,
my dad wasn't there,
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(Before)
The only girl I'll hit is Mary Jane,
she really takes away the pain,
When I'm down she lifts me,
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