Hi. My name is Sarah. I am currently 17 and I am a soon-to-be senior in high school. I was always looking for a site to get constructive criticism of my work and actually just get my work read. If you look at the source of all of my poems except one (The Fire Inside, which was written by my friend Tim) it will say 'By Me' or 'An original poem by me'. All of these poems were written by me and only me. I hope to get some comments on them someday because I want to hear what you guys think. Please don't be hesitant to say something you don't like about it! It's all things I can learn and think about while I'm writing my next poems! :) Thank you so much.
The blinding sun of winter,
Beating on sad souls.
Where snow runs deep on the ground outside,
Compacting under our feet.
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The leaves, they dance with a rhythm so light
As they float down on this cool autumn night.
There's not telling where they will land
As they wisp through the air and flow near a band,
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Sadness, it locks up my soul and shuts my world down.
I sit here with an invisible crown,
of clouds.
When my body lies down the clouds form over me and start to rain,
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With in my mind, I thought I knew
That I dare not travel back,
This road so dark, dim, and blue,
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His heart who has loved, is filled with delight,
Though beats of remorse could ring through.
The airs of the dreamer fill up the night
As their dream ship sails into the blue.
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