Your poems are not alot, But very sincere! Some poets can express all their thoughts abd feelings in two pages! ! you express them easily and simply and beautifully in small simple words.... I admire you! !
i really luv iall of your poems i just cant choose one i like the most. u have a beautiful talent.
Your a good young poet, I look forward to reading more of your poems. What I like most is the thoughts that your poems give me; they really start important conversations that we as people the world over need to address. Already I can see wisdom in your work and power in your writting. Keep up the great work.
I loved your What will I do without you? Expression of feeling of separation is really touching, Keep it up
i adore it <3 really it is an amazing simple but had many true meanings
A Lonely Star
A lonely star in the sky,
Is looking for a friend,
It wants to die,
Cause no one intend.
But if it found a friend,
Will he care,
Or no occur.
Poor lonely star,
Let the moon be your friend,
And don't care about the end.
Cause the moon is also lonely friend...
i like this poem it so warm, good diction thanks