A lonely star in the sky,
Is looking for a friend,
It wants to die,
Cause no one intend.
...
what will I do when you leave me?
I'll be alone,
I'll miss you,
I'll miss your hug when i'm crying,
...
We reached life free,
I hope this will forever be,
but do you think so?
this'll be till you grow?
...
How are you my star?
Are you still alone?
Or you talked to the moon?
And why are u so sad? did he came?
...
This is my best poem of Afzal Shauq and I think that friendship is one of the most important things in life. A person should have have many friends, but only one or two to be his best. A best friend must control the heart and mind too.The best way to win hearts is friendly or loving smile as the poet of this poem says.
Friends shouldn't be sad of each others on each single thing, or else they will bored then separated or fight. They should love the bad things in every one of them so that they can correct it or make it better later on.
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I always needed time on my own
I never thought I'd need you there when I cry
And the days feel like years when I'm alone
And the bed where you lie is made up on your side
...
Another day has gone
I'm still all alone
How could this be
You're not here with me
...
crying in the far dark land
tears there are more than sand
Alone and no one is there to hear
no one think or even feel
...
crying in the far dark land
tears there are more than sand
Alone and no one is there to hear
no one think or even feel
...
A Lonely Star
A lonely star in the sky,
Is looking for a friend,
It wants to die,
Cause no one intend.
But if it found a friend,
Will he care,
Or no occur.
Poor lonely star,
Let the moon be your friend,
And don't care about the end.
Cause the moon is also lonely friend...
Your poems are not alot, But very sincere! Some poets can express all their thoughts abd feelings in two pages! ! you express them easily and simply and beautifully in small simple words.... I admire you! !
i really luv iall of your poems i just cant choose one i like the most. u have a beautiful talent.
Your a good young poet, I look forward to reading more of your poems. What I like most is the thoughts that your poems give me; they really start important conversations that we as people the world over need to address. Already I can see wisdom in your work and power in your writting. Keep up the great work.
I loved your What will I do without you? Expression of feeling of separation is really touching, Keep it up
i adore it <3 really it is an amazing simple but had many true meanings
i like this poem it so warm, good diction thanks