Wassila Nader

What Will I Do? ? ! ! : (

what will I do when you leave me?
I'll be alone,
I'll miss you,
I'll miss your hug when i'm crying,
I'll miss your kiss when I'm smiling,
I'll miss you.
and you wont be there to hold you,
I'LL CRY
and i wont find you beside
to tell me WHY? ? ?
I'll sit apart,
with you in my heart.

BUT! ! !

when I look beside,
I wont see your eyes,
To smile together,
and cry together.

I don't have another one
to talk with,
to sit beside asif i'm sitting beside an angel.
to sit beside,
and cry on her chest.

you are my all
and I have no more
but I want to know
what will I do? ? ?
I love you
and you'll leave me

THEN..............
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO? ? ? ? ! ! ! : (: (: (

(this poem is dedicated to my best and only friend Doha Ewiess) .

Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 22, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, January 22, 2010

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  • Rohit Sharma - - Working on my book (6/24/2010 5:26:00 PM)

    Beatifully expressed...I can feel the pain...Brilliant.God bless u and ur friend...and ur friendship...

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  • Kieran J96 (6/14/2010 11:33:00 AM)

    perfectly shows the pain that love can cause,
    a great poem

    thnx!

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (2/3/2010 8:20:00 AM)

    expression is expressed here

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  • Kranthi Pothineni (1/26/2010 10:33:00 AM)

    Captures the pain of love well. Sad one but expressive one.

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  • Angelica Ayman (1/8/2010 5:44:00 PM)

    great feelings, , i like the way u express it, ,
    the words, , the rhyme, , the way AMAZING! !
    like it soo much
    thx 4 charring
    ang.

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  • Nilufer Dursun (1/4/2010 4:10:00 AM)

    I see the story of a real friendship in this poem, you have a sensitive heart my dear comrade of poetry...you have been reflected your sincere feelings...8 points fot nice poem.
    Nilufer DURSUN

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  • Siddharth Singh (1/3/2010 1:00:00 AM)

    A true reflection of your dedication and undying
    love for your friend. And not to mention that
    you are a natural talent. Good luck.

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  • Louie -Love & Peace- Levy (1/2/2010 11:05:00 PM)

    Your poem is sincere and reflects your loving emotion for your friend,
    Their reply has more value than can ever be judged by strangers.
    Myself included. TFriends may also want to keep their name private.

    ...Louie
    Levy

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  • Ian Curtis (1/2/2010 8:32:00 PM)

    You can never replace a true friend, and trust me I know, but they can never leave you.

    Good luck my young friend

    Ian

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  • Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (1/1/2010 10:21:00 AM)

    You're a gifted soul Wassila.. This one is really good.

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  • Earam Dio (12/19/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    Its a really good and nice poem Wassila
    it has good meanings and feelings for the reall friendship

    hope u miss no1

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  • Ken E Hall (12/4/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    Nice dedication to your best friend
    I don't think it will happen good work
    regards

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  • Abdullah Musa (12/3/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    Gud work, keep it up. Check 'The Cry of an Orphan' out from my collection.Think there is somtin incommon.

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  • Abdullah Musa (12/3/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    Gud work, keep it up. Check 'The Cry of an Orphan' out from my collections.Think there is somtin incommon.

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  • Anju Addanki (12/3/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    Oh wow thats a realy lovely one

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  • Gabrielle Love (12/2/2009 1:58:00 PM)

    i really like diz poem. it's like everythin wrapped in one. keep up the gud work x0x0x-gabbie

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (12/1/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    like everything else in life, you will survive.

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  • Wandering ScarletWandering Scarlet (11/30/2009 2:34:00 PM)

    i think you spelled 'angel' as 'angle'

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  • Patrick A. Martin (11/28/2009 7:54:00 PM)

    This very touching I also dedicated a poem to Doha. I hope yu are both well and happy.

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  • hemalatha ravichandran (11/27/2009 4:24:00 AM)

    interesting............my comment is what can be done? let u think it over..........also appreciate your comments on mine.............

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