Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 200 Points (India)

2009 A.D


A page mark of time, the year 2009
people do not rhyme, yet remain fine.

They'd rather listen to music for hours
walk for a mile talking through towers.

Sitting before screen they'd rather chat
for hours they'd gossip once they'd start.

Someone would like to watch only T.V
Sports, soaps and news whatever may be.

Electronic age has made people smart
living in an era of science and living art.





© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved. 

Submitted: Saturday, April 04, 2009
Edited: Thursday, June 05, 2014

Topic of this poem: time

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  • Rookie surya . (5/12/2009 3:54:00 AM)

    art of living is the solution for this modern time/year.good poem.posted 10 for u.
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Subroto Chatterjee (5/12/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    Made me think of Chaplin's film 'Modern Times'. Though the theme is different in the film, the flip side of progress is finely etched in the film and your poem. Write on, voice of time! !
    Cheers.
    Subroto (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashraful Musaddeq (5/10/2009 12:20:00 PM)

    'A page mark of time, the year 2009
    people do not rhyme, yet remain fine.'

    Truely said, infotech age is eating up emotion silently.
    Love this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (4/9/2009 11:53:00 PM)

    wry comment on modern life. good observation.people do not rhyme- i like this line.


    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (4/6/2009 3:02:00 PM)

    Certainly your rhymes remain fine. I like your couplets. And your
    wit and wisdom.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 279 Points Indira Renganathan (4/4/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    'people do not rhyme, yet remain fine'.....practically true...youngsters remain fine for they can well organise old age homes....you're competing to land on Everest very fast....let go (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Joseph Poewhit (4/4/2009 1:17:00 AM)

    Sort of built Gods and made them into idols. People have made GOLDEN CALF'S as in the days of Moses. A lost sense of priority has erupted greatly. (Report) Reply

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