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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan
(11/22/2009 4:27:00 PM) |
I rated you a 10. This poem I may consider ranking as a professional poet's rank..Very good. At first I have hesitation in reading, the I got interested as I go on and found a very surprising thought for a young like you! Keep on!
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Nathan Chilton
(9/9/2009 9:13:00 AM) |
This poem is really excelllent and you have done really well keep up the good work what you have done.
love and light nathan c
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Ken E Hall
(9/3/2009 4:58:00 PM) |
A poem full of depth and very meaningful with the clever use of inuendos
your skill is excelllent Shash great title too
regards Ken e
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dr veenaa rai
(8/8/2009 12:58:00 AM) |
your imagination, your love for detail, your compassion, your soul is a pure one, boy! am happy people like u exist...great write...10+
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Myrtle Thomas
(7/31/2009 11:41:00 PM) |
Wow Shan! you have such a vivid imagination.Your poetry is a surprise each sentence and stanza.Your mind seems to explode on the paper in a joyful party of words.They even seem happy dancing on the page. A grand interesting poem.Keep them coming. (HUGS) Myrtle Thomas
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Louis Rams
(7/30/2009 4:49:00 PM) |
fiction and non- fiction go hand in hand
and your tiger and lioness have taken their stand
so now it's time to strike up the band.
maybe now they are seeing that war is nothing but grieving.
a good write shas a ten
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Hasmukh Amathalal
(7/29/2009 7:02:00 AM) |
Whatever…..
Finally the heaven on earth
The lion can touch the tigress with claws of love and passion
Not with devil’s arms and bloody teeth..... if this can happen then there can be heaven on earth.. good imagination...10
read mine.. its love.. what if....
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Maia Padua (Snow)
(7/13/2009 8:35:00 AM) |
very nice...
amusing thoughts..entertaining..
brings amusement to our heart....
very vivid....as if im watching a movie...
with your great imaginations
..you are a brilliant one, indeed
10++++
lovelots,
maia
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