Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 80 Points (June 5th / Palghat- Kerala- India)

A Boozer Was Old Uncle Stall... - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

(Solo)
A boozer was old uncle Stall
Not sober he, know all;

Little Tommie he once asked:
Home, beer two cans I had;

Two en routes at Bill Richard,
Two cans from neighbors bar,

Tommie, add and tell me now
What is the number; cans’

(Chorus- thrice)
Tommie, add and tell me now
What is the number; cans’

(Solo)
‘Two at home and two at bar
An’ two, at Bill Richard’s

Total six an’ plus one you
That makes it seven, Sir! ’

(Chorus- thrice)
Total six and plus one you
That makes it seven, Sir! ’

PS: My daughter asked why chorus thrice... yes; thrice, two times...that makes it six...to six cans of beer...cheers, old Stall!

17th June 2009


Comments about A Boozer Was Old Uncle Stall... by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Rookie Nalaysia Vizcarrondo =) (12/12/2009 9:55:00 AM)

    love it you are write great poetry (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Winnie Angel (9/28/2009 7:12:00 PM)

    Quite a boozer in the Uncle...nice write...the easy flow is quite intersting....Winnie (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,148 Points Marieta Maglas (8/27/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    excellent song-poem, wonderful rhymes, lovely to read..............10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Seema Aarella (8/19/2009 12:17:00 AM)

    You are going to give the westerners a run for their money...excellent! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ana Zaldivar (7/4/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    excelent poem :) nicely written and nice rythm: D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deependra Kumar Jha (7/1/2009 5:04:00 AM)

    a wonderful song/poem! just loved it. wish I could write one like this... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (6/30/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    a good limerick, isn't it.. i llike the fun way you quiz the children and the explanation added to comprehension and fun.10


    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (6/29/2009 11:25:00 AM)

    Interesting poem.....well written! ! ....thanks for sharing.
    Merna (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Nooruddeen Mm (6/27/2009 5:46:00 AM)

    A good song i would say, in a kiddie language.
    I enjoyed it.
    Uncle Stall.. Ha I like him too
    Good work Keasav, specally the kiddie style.
    Keep it up

    Thanks for sharing
    Nooruddeen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/24/2009 8:12:00 PM)

    abeautiful cute poem..well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr.Wardha Jawdat (6/22/2009 3:35:00 PM)

    lol....lol....you rock! ! ! ! !
    as always i shall say you should be writing serious kiddie literaturue!
    bravo! ..(chorus thrice) ..=) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noha El3wdy (6/21/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    this kind of poetry, or songs is great i wish i can write something like this
    great work. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,578 Points Ken E Hall (6/20/2009 5:36:00 PM)

    Uncle Stall did not drink alone and company he enjoyed and this poem so did I,
    we all av ' em in a cupboard...cheers++++10
    regards
    uav1 4me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/20/2009 2:32:00 PM)

    a song in a poem..beautifull..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Martyres (6/20/2009 8:53:00 AM)

    Cheers to Uncle Stall....a very engaging and interesting character indeed...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Maitreyee Joshi (6/20/2009 8:43:00 AM)

    this is a good one.i like it! 10 to uncle stall. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (6/20/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    A very colorful and engaging write. Old Uncle Stall sounds like quite
    a character. I like him.10, for you.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Maia Padua (6/20/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    nice..amusing write
    off memories flowing
    into a fine story..a nice song
    great...from a versatile poet
    as always my 10++++++ for you

    lovelots,
    maia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 411 Points Ency Bearis (6/20/2009 6:36:00 AM)

    funny one...hicc....needs to be sober...hicc..after those booz...but its nice song...great write...10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (6/20/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    Amazing land at your door side...capture the pentagon of a witty
    words of line...my salute to you...a perfect poem of memories
    thank you....a 10 +++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 8, 2009


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