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a crow sat on a tree, in the compound
and started to crew, kha kha kha kha,
the lady of the family quickly cleaned up
the house, went in for a wash and change,
rushed to kitchen to cook a special dish.
as she finished, saw to great surprise
her little brother now grown handsome,
at the door, after many years.the happy
guy surprised to see his cousin and
sweet heart, gorgeous and beautiful
who stood in a corner, her little toe
drawing an unknown picture on floor
unable to speak, having choked up.
the crow when heard of micro friendly
foot steps, warned the lady of the house
who beliving in its wisdom went for it! .
=o0o=
surya surya
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Ivor Hogg
(10/14/2009 3:43:00 PM) |
interesting juxtaposition of a crow and a lady
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Alandra Moreira
(10/11/2009 10:58:00 AM) |
a very nicely worded story in a poem! thanks for the read! !
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Sandhya S N
(10/8/2009 12:11:00 AM) |
hmmm nice story
intelligent warning too
regards
sandhya
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Marieta Maglas
(10/7/2009 9:05:00 AM) |
Your crow is like Poe's raven.Moreover, your poem contains indian philosophy and it is like a puzzle. Nice narrative poem, very well written .Thank you for sharing.....10+++++++
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Anusha Subramanian
(10/6/2009 7:08:00 AM) |
A nice story in a poem.. Thanks for sharing.. :)
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Anju Addanki
(10/5/2009 12:58:00 AM) |
A cute story in the form of poem ver nice.
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